Thank you for speaking out about this. I have been so discouraged that more in the Church, especially those who claim to be orthodox Catholics have not spoken out about this.
I have no comment on grammar or similar superficial aspects of the essay.
As to the content: wow, that's an eye-opener! We need to examine our collective conscience as a nation and also as individuals, badly. Thank you, Matthew
Leave out the items that related to nuclear wart. They are supportive a discussion on Nuclear war, not one on immigration. For each item you need a Heading / classification / Descriptive word or 2 that starts the paragraph. If you cannot identify a Heading I would suggest that the paragraph either needs to be rewritten or deleted.
Thank you for speaking out about this. I have been so discouraged that more in the Church, especially those who claim to be orthodox Catholics have not spoken out about this.
I have no comment on grammar or similar superficial aspects of the essay.
As to the content: wow, that's an eye-opener! We need to examine our collective conscience as a nation and also as individuals, badly. Thank you, Matthew
Leave out the items that related to nuclear wart. They are supportive a discussion on Nuclear war, not one on immigration. For each item you need a Heading / classification / Descriptive word or 2 that starts the paragraph. If you cannot identify a Heading I would suggest that the paragraph either needs to be rewritten or deleted.